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Me trying to create an Other World from Silent Hill


background stock :iconmetropolis-decay:


*EDIT*

I changed the picture a little bit. Making it mored dark, me more visible, and moving me to the stair way ^_^ Hope it's better

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:iconjinxkat007:
I like it, though I think you could be a little more clear in it, though I have no idea how that can be changed ^^;

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"When life gives you lemons make tacos out of them, then laugh as the world tries to figure out how on earth you made tacos out of lemons!"
~Jinxy~
:iconmaki121:
? Erm...ok... Clearer? I think I understand...maybe

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:iconjinxkat007:
Like, you almost blend into the background to the point where it's not easy to pick you out ^^;

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"When life gives you lemons make tacos out of them, then laugh as the world tries to figure out how on earth you made tacos out of lemons!"
~Jinxy~
:iconmaki121:
oh. Well I tried to make myself more visible. YOu should of seen it before WOOH! Yeah>_> Guess I need to fix that up

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:iconjinxkat007:
Well, it's good otherwise, I have to say :D

You are daring to use your own image :D

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"When life gives you lemons make tacos out of them, then laugh as the world tries to figure out how on earth you made tacos out of lemons!"
~Jinxy~
:iconcody-of-the-korn:
I like this one a lot, too!
But I think the positioning could possibly be a bit better, depending on how you see it.
Like Adri said, when you look at the picture, you are not exclusively the first thing your eye catches. To make you stand out more, I might soften up the image a tiny bit (try feathering around the edges, but just a little bit), and move you slightly to the right, right about where that bottom of the staircase thing is. Bringing you to the left slightly I think provides more of a stand-out, and then I would move the Silent Hill part over to a different spot - more to the right, slightly in the middle of the bottom foot of the stair case right there, and then down a bit. There is a bit more space there filled with black to help bring out the letters and present them in more of a contrasting, eye catching way. I think that would go hand in hand, compliment your image more as the subject of the picture. Kind of like a poster for a game or a movie. But I definitely like this one. The colors work really well, why not making the top half of the sky the same color and style as the rest of the picture? It might give the whole thing more of an eerie effect.

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:iconmaki121:
thanks ^_^

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:icondeadisalivebutending:
nice.

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:iconmaki121:
sure. I will do that ^_^

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Apr 2, 2006, 10:50:21 PM

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